Three parts!!! That's something! Good! Part I The Ryans’ holiday in London was absolutely ORDINARY ... ... ran to help THE PASSENGERS. ...got A bullet in his collarbone, he was LUCKY that his wife, a surgeon, HAD stopPED blooding. ... for some (NO NEED FOR 'period of') time. ... who HAD BEEN saved by Jack ETC
FAIR - GRAMMAR-GRAMMAR, ALAS! Part II ...his arm still HURT but it was not a reason for not GOINGto the court ... ... a witness FOR THE prosecution... THE OFFENDER WAS MILLER, a man WHO HAD TRIED to kill the Royal Family ... ... (NO 'THE')Miller’s lawyer ... ...but the latter REMINED self-confident and (NO 'could') answerED all THE questions. ETC
FAIR! Part III The Ryans’ life SEEMED to be THE SAME as before the INCIDENT in London: ... Sally attended THE kindergarten. ... began to SEARCH the information about ULA. ... asked Cathy TO DO the same. ... there was no EVIDENCE of THE ULA’s activity in America. ETC
Part 4 Good! Slips. … Mr. Muller explained TO him … … A warm relationSHIP but THOSE words … … Cathy got (no ‘feel’) better … … Sally in her turn STAYED in hospital. Jack began to work in A CIA office… ETC
Good! Slips: … A New photo from a satellite … … the organization was neutralized … … the latter DISCOVERED it … … only by THE FBI … …. plan hoW to avenge Jack. … took the people in the house (NO ‘as’) HOSTAGE (no plural) hostages. Etc
Three parts!!! That's something!
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Part I
The Ryans’ holiday in London was absolutely ORDINARY ...
... ran to help THE PASSENGERS.
...got A bullet in his collarbone, he was LUCKY that his wife, a surgeon, HAD stopPED blooding. ... for some (NO NEED FOR 'period of') time.
... who HAD BEEN saved by Jack
ETC
FAIR - GRAMMAR-GRAMMAR, ALAS!
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...his arm still HURT but it was not a reason for not GOINGto the court ...
... a witness FOR THE prosecution...
THE OFFENDER WAS MILLER, a man WHO HAD TRIED to kill the Royal Family ...
... (NO 'THE')Miller’s lawyer ...
...but the latter REMINED self-confident and (NO 'could') answerED all THE questions.
ETC
FAIR!
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The Ryans’ life SEEMED to be THE SAME as before the INCIDENT in London: ... Sally attended THE kindergarten.
... began to SEARCH the information about ULA. ... asked Cathy TO DO the same.
... there was no EVIDENCE of THE ULA’s activity in America.
ETC
Part 4
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Slips.
… Mr. Muller explained TO him …
… A warm relationSHIP but THOSE words …
… Cathy got (no ‘feel’) better …
… Sally in her turn STAYED in hospital.
Jack began to work in A CIA office…
ETC
Good!
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… A New photo from a satellite …
… the organization was neutralized …
… the latter DISCOVERED it …
… only by THE FBI …
…. plan hoW to avenge Jack.
… took the people in the house (NO ‘as’) HOSTAGE (no plural) hostages.
Etc